The black rubber of the mask dug into
her face, the weight of it making her head heavy and slow. By now
she was used to the effort required to breath, the constant
feeling of being out of breath and the hiss of air sucked through the
filters. Looking through the glass of the door, she could see the
fog glowing orange with the last rays of the moon's reflected light.
It swirled and coiled around the ground as if looking for prey.
The vapor looked every bit as
malevolent as it was. She shuddered thinking about the thin layer of
plastic that would be the only thing between her skin and that
nightmare. As she finished tucking her curls under the white plastic
hood she checked her seals with the air hose. She was alone, the last. The
others had left, each one day apart promising to call if they found
safety. The radio sat silent for seven desperate days as one by one
they left walking towards the horizon following a different point of
the compass.
It made no difference if she stayed or
left now. There would only be 24 hours of air if she walked or if
she stayed. She reminded herself, there was the hope of the unknown
if she walked, as small as it might be.
The door hissed open and the fog lashed
in making her flinch as it wrapped ephemeral tentacles around her
seeking hungrily for any crease or seam it might exploit. A shiver
danced up her spine as she stood still in fear. It poured around her
staining the suit and the walls, consuming the air of the habitat.
She steeled herself and stepped across
the threshold. Northwest was her direction. She clipped the last
radio to her suit and walked into the dark.
Her footsteps crunched in the brown grass as she walked across the
dead farm, the dead land, the dead earth.
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Word count: 324
Entry for Trifecta Week Ninety-Four
Challenge word: Mask - Definition 3: a protective covering for the face
Such desolation! Love the 'what-the-hell' attitude.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kymm. I tried to push a little darker this week.
DeleteI like the open ending. Great work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Draug, I went away from a happy ending this week, but thought I'd leave a little space.
DeleteHow very terrifying and dismal-I sincerely hope that she gets better of that killer fog and reaches safety-though a dead earth does not sound too promising...but still,living is better than dying,any day:-)
ReplyDeleteWhat a grim proposition. Tightly written. Thanks for linking up.
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